Monty's Big Decision

by Erin Liles
(Kyle, TX)

Listen and read along to Monty's Big Decision, a funny story about the election process. Teach kids this complicated matter as Monty tries to distinguish between political parties, polls and platforms.



There was shouting in the treetops and hollering in the mountains. There was buzzing along the ant trails and down in the rabbit holes.

It was time to choose a new president and the forest was humming with excitement.
“The election is here!” the animals shouted. “Who will you vote for?” they asked each other.

Monty the raccoon heard talk about candidates and conventions, caucuses and campaigns. But while everyone else discussed and debated, Monty was quiet.

“I don’t know who to vote for,” Monty said worriedly.

“It’s an important responsibility,” said his dad.

“It’s your civic duty,” said his mom.

But Monty said, “I’m not ready!”

Monty decided he needed some help. So, he dashed off to find Scotty, the Beaver.

“You need to learn about parties,” Scotty said, the water spraying from his fur as he laughed. "Parties will help you decide who to vote for.”

So Monty went to Badger’s birthday party. Monty played games. He wore a festive party hat. He ate cake. When it was all over, he knew that parties were fun, but he didn’t know who to vote for.

Off he scurried to talk to Henry, the squirrel. “Not those kinds of parties,” Henry said, his nose twitching with laughter. "Political parties.”

“But what are political parties?” Monty asked.

“Political Parties are groups of people who have the same ideas about how our country should be governed or ruled,” Henry told him.

“Oh,” said Monty feeling more confused than ever.

“Political parties are an important part of deciding who to vote for,” Henry said, “but you also need to find out about platforms. Platforms will tell you what each person wants to do as president. Then you can decide who to vote for.”

So Monty went to the largest platform he could find, the town stage. He felt big. He felt tall. He did a little dance and sang a little song.

When he was finished, he knew platforms were great places to sing and dance, but he still didn’t know who to vote for.

So Monty strode off to talk to Fred, the bear. “Not those kinds of platforms!” Fred said shaking his big furry head. "Platforms are the ideas that a candidate has, or stands on about different things,” Fred said. “Parties and platforms are important in deciding who to vote for, but you also need to know about the polls. The polls will tell you who is winning.”

Monty went to look at the polls. He saw that they were big. He saw that they were tall. He saw that they held up lights or signs. When he was through looking at the polls, he knew that polls did important work, but he still didn’t know who to vote for.

“This is harder than I thought,” said Monty.

Finally, Monty trudged over to see Rose, the Eagle.

He found her in a giant nest of sticks in the tallest tree in the forest.

He told Rose what he had learned, she flew down and said, “Not those kinds of polls. The polls in an election tell who is winning and who is losing before everyone gets to cast their vote.”

“It’s all so confusing.” Monty complained.

“Yes it can be confusing, but it’s very important.” Rose said. “Parties give us ideas about what the candidates believe. Platforms tell us what each candidate wants to do for our country. And polls give us information about who people are voting for.”

“Now I know those things are important,” said Monty, “but I still don’t know who to vote for.”

“Go out and listen,” Rose said as she flew away. “Then you will know just what to do.”

So Monty went to the political parties and listened. Then he went to listen to the candidates speak about their platforms. Finally, Monty listened to the polls. And little by little he made up his mind. Finally the day came to cast his vote.

His dad said, “It’s an important responsibility.”

His mom said, “It’s your civic duty.”

“I’m ready!” said Monty.

“Deciding who to vote for was a big decision,” he told his parents.

“But I did it! And I’m glad it is over.”

“That’s great son,” said his dad. “Next you can vote for the governor.”

Monty gulped and said, “Uh, what’s a governor?”

And the shouting and hollering and buzzing began once more.

To read more of Erin's work visit her blog, Coloring Outside the Lines.


* Image Courtesy Josh Tidsbury.

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Jun 07, 2016
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interesting
by: darius

its a very intereresting story about monty thank you.

May 19, 2016
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nice i liked it very so much sike
by: coops

nice liked that very so much

sike

May 09, 2016
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👍 👍👌
by: HAMAJ

damn funny story

Apr 22, 2016
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mo
by: Anonymous

it is intresting

Feb 07, 2016
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Good story
by: Kile

I liked it because it was interesting and fun for me.

Oct 18, 2015
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Monty is so funny.
by: LaDy1kOkO

I read this with my daughter (11) and it made me laugh, but not her. Good story.

Aug 29, 2015
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audio
by: kaushal

I liked a lot, the audio was very good

Aug 26, 2015
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BORING
by: HIRA BASHIR

IT WAS A VERY BORING STORY AND IT HAD NO PROPER ENDING IN IT.I AM VERY DISSAPOINTED BY THE AUTHOR OF THIS STORY.
HATE IT
REGARDS
HIRA BASHIR

Jul 20, 2015
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to political
by: jack c

i don't think 9 year old's would get this story

Jun 04, 2015
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NICE
by: dennis

VERY USEFUL

Feb 11, 2015
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it was so funny
by: Anonymous

this was such a funny story. Maybe one of the best.

Jan 21, 2015
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I really liked it
by: dylan

I read this with my dad and I loved it by dylan

Sep 01, 2014
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Nice but ...
by: habiba hossam

Where is the rest of the story after the forest started buzzing and the holes and......
Plz complete I need it for home work vacation 10 marks plz but I give 5 stars

Oct 19, 2013
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my opinion
by: Alex

This story was very interesting.I loved it.

Mar 03, 2012
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Electoral process
by: Amy B

A complex idea that is very tangible to young readers. Way to go :)

Feb 29, 2012
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interesting
by: jesse waterman

I really liked the story.

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